Film poster - Film festival

My film is an independent british film, normally independent films get screened at a film festival before full release. Therefore I have created my own film festival that will feature on my film poster. I have used 'Sundance Film Festival' as the inspiration because it is a well known film festival that features independent films.

Front cover draft feedback

For my first draft of my front cover film magazine I have been given a grade and written feedback. The grade I have been given is a C. I know that I can greatly improve on this grade. The feedback that my teacher has given me to improve on is the position of the image. The font size for the sell lines and include more more text to fill in the places.

first draft poster feedback alterations

I have listened to the advise from my teacher and I have changed the font for the actors names so that it is better suited and looks better visually. I have changed the the release date to a later date so that it is more realistic. For the credit block I have replaced the paramount logo and lettering to my own. I have created my own production company called 'Mountain Hill Productions' and created my own logo and put it on the poster. 

I have also included a review and rating, which makes my poster have more of a real look and also meets more conventions of a already exhisting film poster.

Poster draft feedback

For the first draft of my film poster I got given a grade and written feed back from my teacher. The grade I got given was a C, this grade is something that I can definitely improve on by altering and improving the poster from the critique that my teacher has gave me.

The areas my teacher has noted to work on are change the product company/logo that I have used in the credits. Review the font for the actors names. Review and change the release date and include some critic reviews. All of these things are something that I am very much able to act on to achieve the higher grade.